In the beginning of Part C, Rama kills Vali. This is seen as
almost controversial. He sends an arrow straight into his body and watches him
bleed out. This part of the story is in a rhyme scheme. I like this. I might be
able to incorporate rhyming into my story to make it different then anything I
have written before. There was sadness that came from the death of Vali. With
the verses again having a rhyme, it adds a different feel to the discussion of
how people feel about the death of Vali. It is morose and a somber style of
writing. If I were to have a part in my story that is sad like this, the words
and phrases in this section would be something to look up to in order to make
it stand out.
Sampati is a character that I can put into my story. Instead
of the vulture like bird telling exactly where Sita is with Ravana, the bird
could be working with Ravana and be sending the monkeys into a trap. Another
option could be out of the Ramayana world completely. It could be in modern
times and a girl has the same powers as Sampati. People know of her powers and
use her abilities for their own advantage. The story could focus around the
girl and gaining the ability to better control her powers. The story could also
go back in time to when the girl got her powers. It would show what exactly happened
in order for the character to be where she is today. It could be seen as a
struggle and something that the character must overcome in order to get to the
point where she is at the end of the story. Adding this to a story would create
a hero-type character that people can relate to even today.
Bibliography:
Public Domain Ramayana written by Romesh dutt, Sister Nivedita, and Frederika Richardson
Macdonald, online source
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