When I saw the list of all the names there were a lot that
looked familiar. I really liked learning about Rama, but after doing weeks of
readings about him I thought that it would be best to not read about him. I
chose to read about Surya.
The first paragraph is really nice. I like the way that it
is written. It is descriptive and provides a lot of context as to where the
story is taking place. The line that says “he was the light of his parents’
life” is really nice. It is important to admire lines like this in ancient
stories. Sometimes the children in these types of stories do not get the love
and admiration that they need. If I wanted to do something very different, I
could take this one line and create my own story from it. It would allow me to
be very creative and take it pretty much anywhere I want to go.
It makes me sad to see Surya and Sangna separated. When he
realizes that he was betrayed it was powerful. The reader can tell how sad he
is that he was betrayed. The fact that he pushed Chhaya out of the car speaks
for himself. He searches for her so much he probably was losing hope. I know
what it is like to love someone so much and to have them be away from you. When
you are looking for them it can be difficult because you don’t know if you will
ever see them again. I could write a story on this. It would be between a human
and their dog. The human would portay Surya while the dog would portray Sangna.
The dog would run away from the human and the human would do anything possible
to get the dog back. It would be a very similar to the original story, just with
the twist of having it be between a dog and a human.
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